[zapman]

hows this web design? Done by using my digital camra, Photoshop, Dreamwaver.

Any ideas to improve it, or is it already good as it gets?
http://www.digitizedesign.com/temp6.jpg

[This message has been edited by zapman (edited August 17, 2000).]

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[zapman]

Ok here a 2nd add-on
http://www.digitizedesign.com/temp9.jpg


[This message has been edited by zapman (edited August 17, 2000).]

[Dizzogg]

Hi Zapman,

I dont really care for either design....The bottom one is a lil better than the first. The left side is pretty cool looking with that globe looking thing in the bg.

I dont like the logo....It needs to be cleaner or something....I cant explain it....

I had a really great design teacher that told me always do at least ten different thumbnails to work out some different ideas...Go seaching around the web some and look at some logos..Most good logos are really clean and grab your eye....

Sorry I couldnt be of more help. You can whip something better than this out, I know it....

[Tinusch]

That logo is kinda nasty looking. Too sloppy, not enough structure. Really cheesy looking.

[Jeezus]

the 'digitize' text is about the only part i like as the 'design.com' part doesnt go with it at all. the text is really big.. the links on the right are boring for both designs, tho i'd go for the one on the bottom if the white text links were actually centered (vertically) within the purple things.

i'm just trying to help.. go and do a bunch more and i'm sure you'll see improvements with each one.