[extralobe]

Hi folks. I discovered this board about a week ago and was amazed - so much talent, so much willingness to help eachother out. I feel like I've learned tons since i began reading here, and i really want to thank everyone who has taken the time to show their images, to give comments and criticism, and for the amazing tutorials i've seen.

I hope I'm not out of line to post an image of my own for comments and criticism. It's a sketch i did a while ago, colored on the computer. I tried hard to apply the suggestions I've heard here; please show me where I've messed up (I'm sure there's many )



fullsize version: http://fatjim.yi.org/~fatjim/scans/images-scanned/manageball_big.jpg

full original file (Gimp XCF)
http://fatjim.yi.org/~fatjim/scans/images-scanned/manageball.3.xcf

[This message has been edited by extralobe (edited August 17, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by extralobe (edited August 17, 2000).]

[Joachim]

welcome extralobe,

I hope you will find this board as fun and useful as I and everybody else does.

That is one freaky pic. Hard to comment on mistakes or anything, since it's rahter abstract, but maybe the way you've shaded/colores the piece could be with more logic..like the drapes and shadows, etc.... But, it's a cool pic

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Joachim
web:
http://home.online.no/~j-barrum/