[Marksman]

did this today
going to try and get me a job so i can buy all the toys i'v been wanting
coments pls




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[lotor]

I like it except for one thing. I think that it looks a little too chaotic. Don't be afraid of having some negative space in it. You don't need the lines everywhere to give it that technological feel.

Why don't you get rid of a lot of those lines and just put them in a few key areas and see how that feels.

Hope this helps . I think this could be a good one.

[Marksman]

how about this????


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[zarck]

is it for a web portfolio?
then its a litle big...

otherwise i think its looks pretty ok..

[Spitfire]

Some sggestions :

The 010101010 theme is a bit overtime by now. You might want to think of something else or use it very invisible in the background.

The color blue is a bit heavy. Maybe go for a lighter shade, possibly more green or grey in it. Play with the opacity.

The typography is a bit boring. Typing your text out is only the first step in the type-process, not the only one.

Other than that i'd say its a pretty nice concept, just dont give it up too early

[Spitfire]

Woops didnt see the 2nd one. 0100101 stuff doesnt apply anymore

[Marksman]

thanks for the replys
i'll post any new stuff i do on it here

thanks agen

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