[duhroach]

Howdy. I'd like some feedback on my new site layout. I threw it together rather quickly, and would like to know how to improve it

http://www.sinewave.net


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[nori]

I think it looks good. Good colors n' shiet. don't really like the mouse over animation for the menu, but that's a matter of personal taste.

[zarck]

not to much to critisize yet

looks good this far..

[SushiMaster]

Did you draw the picture used in the interface? I remember seeing it somewhere, but perhas you were the author...

Anyway, first of all, "Bordom" is actually written "Boredom". You might want to fix that, at least in the title graphic.

This page seems to be a mix of elements which are pretty good on their own, but which don't go well when all mixed together on one page. I think you need to go back to the drawing board... get a pencil and sketch some stuff (even if you can't draw - I can't - it helps to figure out some sort of consistent layout), and then try to reproduce that with photoshop or whatever program you use.

Hope this helps, sorry if this sounds a bit harsh... Good luck :-)

Daniel

[Spitfire]

Hey, looks good. SOme points of attention :

Never combine hand/cursive style typography with really blocky techno fonts like that. It just doesnt mix.

Make a background color, the white hurts my eyes

Like Sushi said, pay a bit more attention to layout. There's not a consistent "line" flowing through it.

I like the shrooms