[Axl]

I haven't posted any work for a while and decided to show this piece. It's going to be used for the third revision to my website. www.kazuya.freeserve.co.uk
Anyway, any and all comments are welcomed,
Axl.
[img]http://www.kazuya.freeserve.co.uk/cigarettes.gif[/img

[Axl]

[k]

Nice work

The perspective seems a little off. I dont know wheather it was just the package or not, but to make it look more in proportion, I would narrow the left opening of the package as it recedes back.

the upper left corner and the lower left corner should narrow to a single point in space, the vanishing point

I really like how you did the shadow. The closer the object is to another the darker the shadow. you got that good.