[k]

A layout



critique please! thanks.

I did this in a layout class about a couple of months ago. Cant wait to work

[Francis]

Very nice - I like the color scheme a lot. I do have a couple of questions, or things that aren't very clear to me -

What is the dark area in the upper left corner? Is it water, or more forest? Hard to tell.

The branch on the left side is placed right on the hut in the distance - it makes it seem as if it's a tiny hut suspended in the branch right above the chimney of the lower hut.

The rope bridge extending from the nearest tree to the one in the middle ground seems to get too small (although it does make a nice dynamic forced perspective sort of thing), unless I'm not reading the size relationship between the near hut and the far hut correctly.

Cool work, though - let's see more.

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Francis Tsai
TeamGT Studios

[AliasMoze]

NIce!
Wouldn't mind seeing more depth in the background, but great nevertheless.

I look forward to seeing more of your stuff. Great so far...

[k]

I didnt started off without too much thought.

The upper foilage, I guess is not too apparent. I shouldnt of have used the white up there. To change it Id propbly make more sshiloutes of various sizes of leaves and branches.

As for the branch I guess I should have mad that darker or all black so there might be some distance or maybe some small leaves.

I was hoping to create depth by placing the branch near the camera, but too bad I cant use depth of field on a drawing. he he, it would of worked with that.

And as for the size ratio I can see the hut in relation to the width of the bridge is different then that of the front.uhhhhh
My excuse is I made the front hut smaller cuz therz a midget living there. Just Messin Shhhhhh, dont tell anyone......

[Axl]

I like the colour scheme and the light source. I think the tree trunk on the right could use a little more detail it doesn't look grand enough. Other than that I like it.