[invisyblninja]

I wrote this whilst observing some leaves... any comments will be welcome.

"Dance!"
I do not want to... I would rather sit.
I am being begged again.

"Come join us."
I don't think they understand,
I am quite comfortable here.

"It will be fun!"
Each individual pleads for me to stand.
Yet, I will remain rested here...

"Why won't you dance?"
It is almost becoming a nuisance.
I am growing tired of the noise!

"It is such beautiful music..."
I will admit that the melody is lovely -
It conjures up memories of the past...

"I think he may join us."
They are right, my friends are right.
I will come dance!

"Yay! He is coming!"
I now dance with my friends...
My friends, the leaves, surround me.

"Are you glad to be here?"
I think that I am -
It is so peaceful, so beautiful.

"This is how life should be."
I agree with you...
And I thank you!


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"You must die... I alone am best!!!"

[A.Buttle]

Bloodhound Gang in the muhtafucking house!

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I wanna get with you, girl!...
And your sister, I think her name's Debra....

Joe Dillingham

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Three Times A Day

[invisyblninja]

what?

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"You must die... I alone am best!!!"

[Ian]

Hey cool poem man. I see a double meaning here. Are you describing a lone leaf, fluttering over to it's fellow leaves and blowing around in the wind? And at the same time describing a person in a club of some sort, being begged by his/her friends to get up and dance with them? Nice poem, I really like it.
Cheers,
Ian

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One man's hill is another man's mountain.

MyHill

[A.Buttle]

Your signature. "You must die! I alone am best!" is a sample that Bloodhound Gang uses in one of their songs.

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I wanna get with you, girl!...
And your sister, I think her name's Debra....

Joe Dillingham

[email protected]
Three Times A Day

[Brue]

if i could dance that would make more sence.