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thepassenger
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Nex
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 Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 11:22 pm |
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Hi and welcome on board!
Not bad for a first try let me give you some feedback:
You have this comic-like black lines still everywhere, but your shading is more a realistic approach, maybe you should just delete them (via smudge tool or paintbrush maybe)
I see you used the airbrush to make the highlights on the armor but on some places it looks very .. blotchy.. the highlights are not the same color there, just go over it with a bigger brush and it will be easier to use the airbrush for that.
I think if you go over it a bit it would come out really nice.
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Nicht schlecht f�r den Ersten Versuch also. Du bist �brigens, ausser mir und Loki, der hin und wieder hier reinschaut, der einzige �sterreicher.. hurra 
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Qory
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| Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 11:23 pm |
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I like the way the knight is in the background with the sword highlighted and coming out... it looks great... the only things I think you should look at is maybe making a small focal point on the knight.. like white eyes or something... and the other thing is the knight seems to be uniformly colored... maybe the top half would be brighter than the legs or something?!?!?! (depending on where the light source is, of course)
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Kyri
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| Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 11:40 pm |
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Welcome Passenger. Thats really great for a first try! I like the dark look the pic has...it might be good if you try adding some subtle light tints in areas on the armour tho. Keep going with it, great work.
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thepassenger
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| Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2000 11:59 pm |
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thanx for the feedback and the tips 
this really helps me.....I am glad I found this forum....
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