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zleog
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 Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2000 6:38 pm |
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DarkVVulf
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| Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2000 7:15 pm |
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Pretty cool pic.
It could probably use a little more color variance on the face and the white strips, they seem like too pure of a color for all of the shadowing going on around them.
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Nex
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| Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2000 1:21 am |
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Pretty neat.
What is he gliding down there? A cable?
If so the cable should bend a bit where his nunchaku is hanging (even if its a really thick one)
The right arm's muscles are odd because he does not seem to have an elbow there.
You could maybe use some line or stonger buntool lines to define some parts on the body.. like the pectorals sides that should go to the deltoides on both sides.
Hard to tell if the legs are off or not because of perspective / foreshortening.
Nice work all in all, welcome to the club.
Oh and it would be great with a background.. maybe a city where he is swinging from house to house or something?
Cya
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