[DeathGrip]

Just whipped this out today, took about 4 to 5 hours total...comments are definitely welcome.

[kos.mandis]

Mmm, piieeee

[klaivu]

humm ...
I like this piece overall, but i find a lot of minor flaws. The lips have dark lines around them, while many parts ( hand, cheek, nose, ear ) are defined a little vaguely. The eyes and the lips are painted with a different style compared to the rest of the image. Hair, shoulder and the pillow seem fine to me, i like the hair particurarly. Also, you should work a bit on her left brow.
Now don't get me wrong, the overall image is good, just some minor things need to be fixed.

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god is an american.

[Nex]

looks very nice.. and a very popular theme

lets go on with critical perfectionism:

the hairline looks strange due to the single hair-strands there.. looks like she is loosing hair. Should be pretty easy to fix.

The chin on the left side of her face looks strange.. I think its too straight.

Her lower right eyelid looks like its hanging down to me

On her other eye there is too much pink in my opinion on the white part of here eyeball.

hard to see something wrong.. maybe fred could help here.. thats all I see on first glance.

Cya



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- Nex

http://on.to/nex

[DuKEZ]

great picture..

does this girl ever wear clothes? :P
i remeber another partially naked paintig of her.. from somone else ;P

[Anthony]

I like the pillow and the hair. I don't like the shading on the face(nothing about you-I hate the Photoshop and airbrush look), but more importantly it doesn't look like her. I haven't seen this photo(I assume it's from a photo right?), but I've seen her on film, she looks a bit different. Maybe make her eyes brighter(not in color-just in expression), and kill the eye shadow. That might work. Nice work overall!

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-Anthony
Carpe Carpem

[random]

klaivu: the dark line around lips are not a bad thing.. (make up lining) but I think klaivu means the left bottom part of the lips where that shouldn't to be seen or not so thick....

[This message has been edited by random (edited June 22, 2000).]

[amnesia]

I like the shoulder. Good shoulder. Pillow is good too.

Crop her head out and just leave the shoulder and the pillow.
Not that the head is bad of course.. but the shoulder and pillow are better.