[sveno]

hello all

this is my first posting here at the digital
art forum. at this time, i am desgning a site
for a multiplayer clan.

for this picture, if have got my inspiration
form eyeball mainly und some of rusted faith.
its not perfectly finished yet, it needs
still some work at the details.

but, i want to know where i stand, and i hum-
ble ask for your opinion and critism. this
interface is the first of this kind i'm doing
and it will be packed into flash, with some
animations.



the forming work was done with visio (vector
porgram) the rest is all photoshop. i only
used standart filters for this one.
the left and right textfields are for some
links and various textes. the main page be-
gins at the lower end of the picture.


sincerely, sveno

[Virotype]

VERY nice! I love it! I'm sure that this will be a great interface. I particularly like the way you put the steering wheel in there. Nice touch

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[synj]

that is bodacious!@#$%(%$__$($_$#+$($#+#(+$#4394=34-343333333 = mc�

-synj www.synj.net

[psi burn]

i really like the middle area, but the upper area like the wings could use just a TAD of freshining up... they look a little to "add noise"ish and soft..try darking them in some areas or adding more depth. and i dont know if you used wind or motion blur or something for the rusty white effects, but it doesnt quite work, contrast the colors a bit more and possibly burn/dodge the area..

otherwise kick ass job :]

[tsunami124]

thats awesome but it looks exactly like the eyeball interfaces

[tsunami124]

oops i didn't even read your post hehe

[sveno]

thank you all for your constructive critism.
i'm aware that the middle part has much from
eyeball. but that "eye" in the middle was
just too perfect for that site ) and i'm
diong this for hobby.

thank you also for the input about the wings.
i will try to give them more substance. more
live.
http://62.2.72.4/sptest/SP_HP.htm

if someone is interested to take a look on
the working stage of the flash is welcome to
peek ) but know, its far from finished.
http://62.2.72.4/sptest/

this URL directs you to the history how i
done this interface. as i told before, its
my first interface, so i may done some weird
steps hehehhe.

ile post the pic again when i have reworked
it as your input suggest.

greetings, sveno

[faustgfx]

*sob* brings back memories.

oooh back in the day... er, yeah.

i dig it.
though i think you should use some more shadowing in it.. mainly the spacepirates text and the interface's outer edges, and add something a bit more varying to the texturing of the background and the blue areas on left and right.



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[paploo]

the image looks kickass and with some nicely placed flash animations could really come alive. watch out you dont over complicate your work in flash though, its very hard to get anything running smoothly when you are using detailed images such as that, as i have learnt in the past...