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klaivu
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 Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2000 7:26 am |
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http://www.saunalahti.fi/~late82/tmp/kokeilu.htm
This is my supposed new homepage/portfolio.
Well, a try at least.
Rip it apart.
p.s : see any errors with the language ? any stupid phrases ?
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god is an american.
[This message has been edited by klaivu (edited June 18, 2000).] |
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2000 7:51 am |
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| The splash screen looks pretty cool. No serious grammatical errors as far as I can see. I'm not sure what "Inehmo" is... When will the rest of the site be up? |
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ex
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| Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2000 7:55 am |
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| Only mistake I can notice is that you put a comma (,) after portfolio, instead of a period. And then you capitolized the next word in the sentence. Were you trying to make a new sentence? I don't think you wanted to do that. But i could be wrong. |
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Nex
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| Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2000 12:37 pm |
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| very creative and funny idea. thumbs up. |
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2000 2:40 pm |
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"...hid under my bed..."
Hid should be changed to hidden.
That and the comma Ex mentioned are the only seripus grammatical errors I see.
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