Sijun Forums :: View topic - Dhabih,guyz pls help(comments pls everyone)Roses

Foz · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 1:54 am

hey slicer is this better?
oi guyz how can i improve this drawin evenmore?

faustgfx · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 2:32 am

a few things about it disturb me a bit.

one, the shadows should be stronger and darker, it looks too plain now

two, the outlines.. they are a wee tad too thick and strong. ditch them completely? *shrug*

add thorns to the whatevertheheck is that part.. a straw or something? (

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a background wouldn't hurt either. even something pretty abstract and vague would propably do. but kill the white. it makes the picture look.. so... er. white.

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How many threads do you need to start for this rose?

synj · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 6:32 am

i'm going to kill you if i see this one more time.

faustgfx · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 7:13 am

funny, i don't think i have seen this one before..

*shruuuuuuuuug*

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micke · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 7:44 am

If you gonna have a outline, make it in a darker shade, like disney does. It also looks a bit muddy on top of it because of the shading.Make it sharper.
Also you could add thorns to the stilk in order to make it more interresting. What is it for by the way? And yeah, if you gonna post this one again please post it in the original thread.
Hope this can help a bit

-Micke

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lotor · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 9:59 am

Tone down your line drawing a lot. Its ok to have it blend into the background on the highlights.

And try not to have the type so boring. Experiment with the type and move it around and try different sizes. Use your creativity.

Don't be afraid to try some crazy design.
Bye

nori · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 10:55 am

if I see that rose again, i'm gonna shove it up your virgin ass.

Loki · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 2:17 pm

a couple of points:

* Dhabih probably has better things to do, than worrying about your painting.

* we're all willing to help, but if some paintings fall through the cracks, wait a little bit and try a different (more completed) painting. Maybe your stuff simply doesn't inspire any comments - that's a comment itself too.

* YOUR NAME IS THE LEAST IMPORTANT THING ABOUT YOR IMAGE!!!!
God, how I hate it when people come with some half finished crap where their name takes up half the image ... Your name won't make it any better. Worse, you make it easy to associate bad images with your name ...

* learn, learn, learn - if you want to get out a reaction of Dhabih, make something cool, so he might even give you positive feedback ...

sorry - my bloodsugar is low right now ...

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Optical · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 5:34 pm

if you post this pic again i will have the yakuza at your house in five!

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dr . bang · Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2000 6:08 pm

Foz, you're starting to make me mad.

Transcend Christ · junior member Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2000 Posts: 9

I'm new here and even I am willing to flog Foz with that damned rose. If drastical changes have been made..that might inspire comments. That's my own opinion though..I'm just saying this because I only notice something if I stare at it for quite awhile

illf0 · junior member Member # Joined: 13 Mar 2000 Posts: 17

*i may be new at photoshop but
*i second that

-br0ke

Foz · Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2000 5:37 pm

gee thankx guyz

8105 · Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2000 6:18 pm

Here is my 2 min's worth... look at how the color is placed....try playing with a WIDE range of the color and multiple Layers

8105

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