[laslauk]

Hi all, I just finished this.. There's no background, but it's no wonder, because I have always had some kind of attitude problem with backgrounds. Maybe something to do with the fact that I can't really handle perspectives.. cause or consequence, go figure.
Anyways, all kinds of comments and crits are welcome.

[Nex]

hmm.. you said its finished?

I like the sketch but the rest looks very.. blurry and a bit strange. There is such a big difference between the quality of the sketch and the quality of the "coloring".
(I can only try to judge the sketch by what is left of it.

I'd say this picture is far from being finished. Keep it up man !

[zapman]

Clothing dont go with the Theme,
Try some Black Pants, with Stripes on the side?
Gloves on hand will fit in too.

Very blured image. More like a Sketch.

I like the Cats, They are in perfect form. Just need to Sharpen them up.

are you useing a mouse?

Chest is Way too high. bring it down a little.




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[tanis]

Hmm.. the sketch is ok, but the coloring is completely unfinished. Everything's so blurry and the sketch is half visible and half not. There shouldn't be any lines or every line.

[laslauk]

Thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them! I have a lot to learn about coloring, I haven't done this kind of stuff before hardly at all.

Finishing has always been my problem, I usually work on a picture as long as it's fun, which basically means I have tons of sketches and a few "finished" works. I really needed a kick in the ass.. Thanks for beating, I want more!

And I do agree, that the colors of the clothes suck. Black and red combination could be more striking, a bit traditional though. I have to be careful for not to turn her into a spice girl, gotta think about it.. I didn't really notice that chest being too high, perhaps the motion blinded me somehow.

And yes I'm using a mouse, which is the dark side of digital art for me. Or maybe I'm just not accustomed to it, but I'm sure I'm going to need professional help before that happens...

[synj]

eheh i actually like it because of the fact it looks unfinished. those tigers are neat heheh ROARRR he says. the lady makes me giggle cuz she looks like she's singing the national anthem or something.

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