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Lange_Pisang · Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2000 3:03 pm

I've made a new sketch, it's almost the same as my previous one but now I've used some other characters. It's also a different perspective...
I think it's really fun to draw stuff like this:

...And like always, I would love to hear some opinions...comments are more than welcome...

Note: I've darkened this sketch a little bit with PS 5.0

-Ryan (Hafkamp)

P.S. It's my birthday today!

I'm 17 now!
*hehheh*
(17 and still writing in "simple" English...aargh!)

LoneDragoon · Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2000 7:10 pm

pretty cool, happy bday. the faces on the hookers are pretty freaky, even for hookers.
the one on the left seems to be able to turn her head around awfully far, I've never seen anybody who could bend like that.

a pretty cool pic overall though.

lotor · Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2000 9:31 pm

Hey happy birthday!!!
My birthday is in 2 days on June 4th.
Bye

mantis · Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2000 2:08 am

It's going to be a bitch to color that in ps, considering the picture is really dirty(no pun intended). You should try to clean it up , besides that it look great. BTW, on the right edge, does it say "satan = geocities". hehe

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without hate. And I can picture us
attacking that world, because they'd
never expect it."

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Hurri-cane · Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2000 2:47 am

happy b-day...and those hookers faces aint pretty, the guy who just bought one must be realy desperate..

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Nex · Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2000 3:15 am

happy bday! Had mine on the 1st btw

There are some anatomy problems with the figures here. The girl to the left has her head turned a strange way.. and her left arm seems to be a bit too thick. The other girl's left breast looks too high I think. Anyway the buildings look cool, and you did a nice job rendering it.

Cya

Lange_Pisang · Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2000 1:41 pm

aaaahhh...

I'm glad to see some replies! Thanks a loh'!
Maybe I'm going color this pic in Photoshop soon, after all, I've only made 2 digital art pics yet...I really have to practice...

Ok, I gotta go now, I HAVE TO party! After all, it's saturday night...(in Holland now)...
Catch'y'all leightur!

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-Ryan Hafkamp

DuKEZ · Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2000 1:47 pm

in regards to the hookers:

"THATS A MAN BABEE" (austin powers)

Lange_Pisang · Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2000 8:07 am

Ooooh behaaaaaaave....mwhahuhuhheheh...(That's Austin Poweres too...)

Now, I've "modified" the sketch. What do you think of it now? Are the hookers worth enough to spend your money or are they still a completely waste of your time AND money...?

I would like to hear what you think of it, I can still modify the sketch if you have some good critique...

-Ryan Hafkamp
P.S. Happy Birthday Lotor!

osk · Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2000 6:06 am

sorry they are still not worth my money ...
hehe
anyways ..umm I think you need to work on the perspective .a bit .. before you work on the figures, because you have to know what perspective you are drawing in .. so the shapes come out looking right.
How you have it right now, it all looks pasted on, (eventhough you got a lot of, sometimes unecesary shading//.
which brings me to your lighting .. define a couple of light sources and stick to them .. and then use that to put some contrast on your sketch ..
well .. thats about all I can say