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Author   Topic : "A new Digital Artist is born"
LeMage
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Joined: 29 May 2000
Posts: 1
Location: France

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2000 4:56 pm     Reply with quote
Hi guys and girls

I'm a french student in 3D art, and a new digital artist.

I need your criticize of my work so let's go to my website :
http://genartist.free.fr

and reply me.



This is my first digital painting

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Nex
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Joined: 25 Mar 2000
Posts: 2086
Location: Austria

PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2000 1:15 am     Reply with quote
hi, and welcome!

Nice site btw.. but not everyone speaks french -> I could not read the stuff there.

The mage here has some anatomy problems it seems.. (as far as I can say the upper body is way too long)

Then the lighting is a bit confusing.. the lightning ball on the staff should cast light on the lower side of the left arm for instance(the raised one) and not on the upper side in my opinion.

Last I think the ambient light is a bit too bright for this scene. (clouds and all, he stands on a big moutain where there is not so much reflective surface for diffuse bouncelight)

Keep it up however, its not bad

Cya



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- Nex

http://on.to/nex
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Slicer
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Joined: 03 Mar 2000
Posts: 187
Location: Sala, Sweden

PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2000 4:17 am     Reply with quote
Very cool pic even thou I have to agree with nex that the upper body is a bit to long and should be more like his shoulders. and the bit rightnext to his hands seem to weird, m aybe should shorten down the arm a bit?
And either it�s one of the hottest places, because it looks like the mountain is as high as the clouds and I think there should be snow on the top.
maybe a polar-bear? =)
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