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Joined: 20 Jan 2000
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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 12:15 pm     Reply with quote
This is my newest painting but I'm not completely satisfied with it... what should
I do otherwise?



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Hurri-cane
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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 12:37 pm     Reply with quote
the first segment of the arms must be longer...now he has way to short arms..

NICE colors, and nice fog...ceep it up




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CapnPyro
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Joined: 25 Mar 2000
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Location: Thousand Oaks, CA

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 3:47 pm     Reply with quote
Looks really cool, has great atmosphere and lighting, other then his upper arm being to short, the only problem with is i really see is the basic layout of the page is a bit dull, just a fellow in the middle with his sword, not to exciting ya know? Maybe some carnage or bodies in the mist.. i say start a new piece tho, more dynamic!

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IKhelix
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Joined: 08 Apr 2000
Posts: 61
Location: Australia

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 4:00 pm     Reply with quote
He lookes like he's doing the oompa-loompa dance the way he's kinda squating...

Nah, cool atmosphere... arms and legs are just a little out.
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AliasMoze
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Joined: 24 Apr 2000
Posts: 814
Location: USA

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 4:02 pm     Reply with quote
Bg, it's nice. I think the pose is a little static. His face looks a little greasy. The arms are too short, as pointed out.

I'd get a more dynamic pose, but that's just me. Anyway, it looks very nice.
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Sedone
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Joined: 11 May 2000
Posts: 455
Location: United States

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 5:00 pm     Reply with quote
Good advice from the others. You might hunch him over a bit, and make him put more weight on the sword, like he's weary after a long battle. Right now he looks like he's just petrified.
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Joined: 30 Apr 2000
Posts: 112
Location: Irving TX USA

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 5:34 pm     Reply with quote
look like dude from Bram Stroker's Dracula.
Hurricane's right elbow should be right above the hips. But he looks very good. Nice color also.

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Muzman
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Joined: 12 Jan 2000
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Location: Western Australia

PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 8:19 pm     Reply with quote
I thought it looked like John Romero.
just lengthen those arms and it'll be fine.
Everything about the guy says he wants to look statue-esque, so let him I say
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PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2000 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
I still keep expecting him to break into a jig at any moment...

Sorry, I have a boring life...

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