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Zor · Posted: Tue May 09, 2000 5:11 pm

Hey.. well I finally got around to completing this sungirl.."note" the Birds i added, MAN they took at least 2 hours per each bird..

Oh the detail!

She is bright but yet its suited for this style of theme.

Let me know what you think..

Cheers.

Zor

Drorak · member Member # Joined: 20 Apr 2000 Posts: 169

The detail of the feathers on the birds are amazing. How do you do it?

Zor · Posted: Tue May 09, 2000 5:28 pm

I'll write a 15 page tutorial if you want on how I did those birds

Nex · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 3:04 am

The beak of the right bird need some tweakin I think.. the highlights seem off there..

Anthony J · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 4:02 am

a bit blurred
but none-the-less
good work mate

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Lange_Pisang · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 4:33 am

I don't know but I think the eyes are a liiiiiiiitle bit too high, cool pic nonetheless...

-Background rulez....

Morganic · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 4:47 am

The grrl's okay, but I really dig the sky.
(and the birds of course).

btw, was that sea done in bryce or did
you brush it?

Freddio · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 5:16 am

awesome

Great hair and lovely background well done

90%

Nex · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 5:53 am

great finish

Some critique?:

.) The eyes really are a bit too high I think

.) the eyelashes look a bit unnatural to me. I guess to the sides they should be longer (though perspective) and a bit more dense overall maybe

.) since the light is coming from the front (I count 3 light sources) you could place a highlight on the upper lip too.

.) The iris could need some detail.. look at your iris then you know what I mean..

last

.) the chin is maybe a bit too round..

I'm sorry that I did critique more than write what is good but you have potential so..

Lajun · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 10:04 am

Her face is a little bright. I mean, the sunset is behind her after all. But it's a awesome pic nonetheless. And she IS a sungirl so.

keep it up Zor.

// Lajun
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Fred Flick Stone · Posted: Wed May 10, 2000 4:57 pm

resembles tori spelling...

DrawingBook · Posted: Thu May 11, 2000 10:19 am

I'm just realizing where I think I've seen something similar to this image. Ever seen the cover of Movie on VHS called "Liquid Sky"?

It sort of reminds me of that.

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Zor · Posted: Thu May 11, 2000 10:23 am

No I haven't? can you get a pic of it?

Drorak · member Member # Joined: 20 Apr 2000 Posts: 169

It does look a little like her.

I found it right away at www.imdb.com they have every movie that has ever been released.