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Zor · Posted: Mon May 01, 2000 7:28 pm

well.. here she is in phaze 2 now. (if ya saw my rough sketch earlier it was a man.. ahem what happend :.. ah well. its the milleniunuiuemnuim so anything is possible.. rite??)

Anyways. the pic is coming along now, "still" lots of errors and is not finished.

comments pls.. (be gentle)

//Zor

[This message has been edited by Zor (edited May 01, 2000).]

zapman · Posted: Mon May 01, 2000 7:50 pm

Howd Zor! =)
Nice image start.. take this on the good side:

Upper lips are Poity, did you mean to do that? (they also need to be darken)

I see a STRONG LINE in the nose (leftside) from eye to nose the curve line is too strong?

she need more hair in the front looks a little bold?

Ohh add some Dagaling EarRings to tell the views she has ears?

but i know your starting on it and may know some of the things, but just giveing feedback.

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Zor · Posted: Mon May 01, 2000 7:54 pm

hmmm earings.. damm nice idea. the thought never slipped my mind.... this is the reason I like to post things here....

Cheers Zap..

//Zor

and yeah there are lots of things that need doing like the nose/lips etc. just too tird to do any more tonight thats all

Tinusch · Posted: Tue May 02, 2000 10:20 am

Heh, man, that crease under her nose is huge. Just thin it out a bit and it should be fine.

Other than that, that pic's coming along nicely. I love the hair and the eyes. Nice job man.

Frost · Posted: Tue May 02, 2000 1:27 pm

Nice image Zor. I like the expression (or lack of)in her face. The spiky hair is cool, but the sides remind me of old david bowie pics. I can't quite make sense of the shadows in her face however, especially under her right eye. Adding ears would be good idea as well. =)

(oh, the highlights in her eyes are symmetrically inversed from one another...

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Quite nice, don't despair. =)
frost.

SaltyDog · member Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2000 Posts: 206

YEAH FROST!! "Ziggy Stardust" that's who that reminded me of...David Bowie's alternate ego rock star!

Zor · Posted: Tue May 02, 2000 1:58 pm

hmm ok she has David bowie hairdo.. but this is a older picture.. check the thread "Phaze3" for a update

Thanks for your comments.

//Z

Zor · Posted: Tue May 02, 2000 2:14 pm

hmm ok she has David bowie hairdo.. but this is a older picture.. check the thread "Phaze3" for a update

Thanks for your comments.

//Z