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chumps
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Location: norwalk, ca, usa

PostPosted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 1:07 am     Reply with quote
I already posted this, but I recieved no replies . If this thread is ignored once more then I will just have to take it like a man and ride off into the sunset~~.

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In terms of the design/graphics of the page you can be as harsh and critical as possible. I have a handful of concerns that I hope will be mirrored by some people. Comments on the actual artwork isn't really neccessary as I have practically no digital work.

The URL is: www.ciab.net/chumps

Also, please do not hesitate to sign my guestbook!

And of course, filling out the feedback formwould be the *ultimate* compliment .

Finally, any tips on how to acquire more hits would be most appreciated.

Regards (praying no one uses netscape 4.6)
chumps
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Togusa
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 2:51 am     Reply with quote
hey chumps
a really coollooking page you have there.
only thing I would change is the legibility of the menu items, or is my 15" screen finally broken ?
Another thing is there were some minor problems with the blind tables (I used Netscape 6 Beta), but I think you know that already.

mfG
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 3:35 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, I like this design too, neat layout and background image... The menu looks messy at first sight but at least the buttons are neatly on top of each other and not scattered all over the place like on some web pages.

Saffron / Sunflower
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hennifer
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 22, 2000 8:19 am     Reply with quote
the graphics at the top and left side of the page hurt my eyes. like really, they HURT them.

imo, that's way overboard with messiness.
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chumps
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 22, 2000 8:24 pm     Reply with quote
Ahhhhhhhh. Well that's good to know, after looking at those silly gfx for so long, they read as clear as a bell. In fact I worried they weren't quite "messy" enough, now I know better!

Thanks for the input.

Regards.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 22, 2000 9:57 pm     Reply with quote
i like it, looks nice and artistic. dont change a thing, heres muh site if you got anything to say about it chumps http://home1.gte.net/capnpyro

btw i really dig the graphics around the border, and that crookedosity about feature is quite insane/genuis, good luck with the art. oh yah i took ap art in HS too, went to thousand oaks hs, graduated in 98, attending cc as well heh

-CapnPyro-
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 22, 2000 10:14 pm     Reply with quote
Cool site capn! Heh, I was gonna say something about that skull thing, but then I read your about section ;p.

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The computer I'm doing this here site on is an Apple PoweMac G4 450, 256 sdram, 27gig hd, and my baby a LaCie Electron 22 Blue monitor.


Gazooks! Is that monitor that super spiffy LCD one that can only be had with those super unspiffy apples? Ah well, although my max. monitor size is 19", I have TWO of 'em, bwahahaha ;p.

Oh and, uhm, crookedosity thing insane/genius? My apologies sir, but I believe you are on crack.

Regards.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 22, 2000 10:23 pm     Reply with quote
hahaha yah that green skull is quite cheesey, i was just lookin for a filler graphic till i make somethin i like. i made the whole site in 3 days and havnt touched it since nah the 22" is made by LaCie, its a crt, didnt have an extra 2500 layin around or i would of gotten the lcd.

yup, need more content and graphics *whistles* guess ill go back to work on it

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