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jcole · Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2000 3:10 pm

Something's missing in this picture. Any idea what would look cool in middle/bottom section, it seems to be bit empty? Blurry in northwest area also. Lack of detail ofcourse as this is bit unfinished one. But any idea?

Hope I understood this UBB-thing clearly

Joppe · Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2000 3:45 pm

Hmm, something with a quite spherish head and round, dark eyes just peeking over the bottom of the pic, maybe. Thanks for critiquing my pic btw...

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Joppe

EyeFool · Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2000 4:03 pm

post it at a bigger size

optic · Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2000 4:38 pm

I wouldnt add anything more, as it might cramp the picture imho. i'd rather try and work a bit more with the composition, of the elements allready present. I really like that bottom left face.

-optic

zapman · Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2000 5:28 pm

Alien Face Trying to come thru the Wall?
Like hes in a Ballune(how it spelled)..

But its looking coool!

sfr · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 12:05 am

Very nice, I like the colors... I don't think I'd add anything to the bottom, but I might try to do something about the shapes in the top-left corner - having something more defined there could help overall balance.

Saffron / Sunflower

jcole · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 4:52 am

Joppe:

No problem.

Eyefool:

Well, it's originally made in resolution of 300x200 so there ain't any bigger versions. I'm bit lazy doing details and lowres images are much easier to make

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Optic:

Hmm.. I'm not sure what is your point with composition, but thanks.

Zapman:

Thankyou very much.

Saffron:

Yeah, lack of detail in upper-right corner. Thanks.

B · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 5:14 am

i would add some red or purple stuff coming out of the spigit in the girls head, but that's just me,.

Tinusch · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 5:59 am

I like Zapman's idea. A head poking through, like he's sticking his head against a sheet of cloth. Like on the cover of Gabriel Knight.

seas · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 7:27 am

uhh, waterripples down there? i think i see some water already...

chalker · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 9:03 am

Like the picture very much, nice colors , cool idea...

Ehmm.. for the part of the middle,

To bring out the people on the side more, I think I should have made some kind of tunnel effect in the middle, with the end of the tunnel ending in black. contrasts nice with the light sides..

but anyhow, post your image when it's done and post it a lit bigger

grz

Luvboat · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2000 9:34 am

Sweet pic, I think its fine exactly how it is, without adding anything to it.