[Joppe]

Hi!

Here:

is the second ever image I've done in Photoshop. The arms and legs look kinda flat, but I'm still quite satisfied with it...

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Joppe

[jcole]

This pic hasn't really got the finished touch, but it could end up quite good. Seems to me that the figure hasn't got any shadows (?). It would look much cooler with them ofcourse, use burn and dodge on some parts of the figure and try to decide from where the light is directed. There's also too much shine. Seems like every part of the body is shining as you've made those hard contrasted speculars -try to figure out which materials shine in real life. The muscles in the arms are quite strange -there are too much connected outlines, brake some of them, like the long line going up in the arm to the right. This picture shows that you've worked on it, but maybe not long enough. I think you've made 1/6 of the work , but anyway. Keep continuing making the pic and it'll look good. This one's ok but not finished.