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dr . bang member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 1245 Location: Den Haag, Holland
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 10:39 am |
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Tell me what ya think. Thanks
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SaltyDog member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2000 Posts: 206
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 10:53 am |
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This piece has Alot of potential. I'm not sure if you're completely done with it, or what. The scarred metal is developing a very nice texture to it, but the green part of the body is a bit amorphous. I'd recommend going in and dropping some darker shadows in there and tightening up the clarity. (Right now the armor and green don't feel cohesive)
Same goes for the gatlin gun on his shoulder. Overall though, I think it could be a KICKASS piece ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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dr . bang member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 1245 Location: Den Haag, Holland
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 6:38 pm |
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Thanks for taking a look at my pic and give me the suggestion, i really appreciate it although i want more people to see my post because i spent alot of time on this! |
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zapman member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2000 Posts: 354 Location: USA
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2000 11:01 pm |
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Hi Dr.Bang,
Yes i agree with SaltyDog. Gun has highlights in the hole? make it sold Black and Shade the Gun more,
Head looks good, I like how you tryed to put detail in!
Just keep going fix it up with more Dark values and Light Values.
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FatPenguin member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 118 Location: too far north
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2000 1:54 pm |
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i'd have to agree that it would look better with some more refinement... perhaps a more obvious light source, higher contrast between highlights and shadows |
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Zor member
Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 198 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2000 5:01 pm |
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Aye, seems no way complete yet, but has a lot of promise, Keep it up
//Zor
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zthee member
Member # Joined: 05 Apr 2000 Posts: 91 Location: karlskrona, sweden
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2000 1:29 pm |
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hello
it could be a REALLY nice image when its done.
although now it looks kinda flat. more shadow might do the trick
regards
//zthee and kattii
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