[Starman]

Heyas all

for my website, im looking for a nice, clean, not cluttered layout for my clients to see what the lowest package i offer will look like.. can people please take a look at... http://www.oriondd.com/index2.htm . and hopefully give me a few tips to improve... thankyou very much

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Think Outside the world you live in

Http://oriondd.com

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[PaK-RaT]

Looks clean u have that going for u. Easy to navigate, also a huge plus.
the website looks too plain. it loads fast BUT, i think u could add some more eye candy to the design. when u flip around the site, the bars shift in orientation...this is a lil distracting. have the bottom bar scroll down, but the link bar at top should stay stationary as you browse the diff sections of the site.
Nice color selection.

[Pigeon]

The text on all the pages could use a good heavy proofreading, especially for clarity. I had to read every sentence twice to know exactly what you were saying.

One notable error - "your companies page" should be "your company's page"

Think of your webpage as your resume. A potential client, like a potential employer, wants to see a *flawless* document. One error, whether grammatical, graphical, or whatever, and they'll go off to one of your 2000 competitors.

I'm sure you've heard it all before, but it's good for all of us to be reminded once in a while.



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-Pigeon
http://members.aol.com/dndunakin

[IKhelix]

"Neat" come sto mind... but people aren't impressed by neat. Pump up da eye candy and watch your spelling... otherwise, it's looking good

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"I don't suffer insanity, I enjoy every moment of it..."

[Starman]

Thankya all for the feedback.

yer, i have been thinking of ways to make the page look less "boring" and with all the spelling and sentance structure, well i just added that to fill in space. ive actually gotta write up some real shit but yer

i shall get to work on it
and repost again when its done...

thankyou all once again...



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Think Outside the world you live in

Http://oriondd.com

Icq #2881689

[theresa]

I'm impressed by neat.

[neutral?]

impressed by neat, theresa?

checkout my neatness over at http://www.neutralised.cjb.net.

just a skeleton right now.. shame.



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Dan | neutral?
:: the digital thatre ::