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Daedalus IIIrd
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 3:36 am     Reply with quote
This eye is part of a centerpiece of a larger image. I'm fairly happy with it, but was wondering if anyone has any ideas on how I could improve it...



It's actually my first digital picture, drawn with a USB mouse...

[This message has been edited by Daedalus IIIrd (edited April 02, 2000).]
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Nex
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 3:45 am     Reply with quote
pretty cool!!

Just my opinion but I think the light source and the shadows around the iris don't fit 100% together.

take a look at this pic here for reference:



Note: I just found this pic somewhere, I didn't draw it.

- Nex
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Chapel
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 9:24 am     Reply with quote
Yeah around the iris the shading makes it look like it dips down into the eye.

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-Chapel
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http://www.geocities.com/chapel_t9/
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TurboYVR
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 10:08 pm     Reply with quote
LMAO.

what are you talking about Golongria? Looks okay to me. Freak. :P
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Golongria
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2000 11:28 pm     Reply with quote
Is it just me or is the pupil a chess piece (pawn)?
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Daedalus IIIrd
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 12:13 am     Reply with quote
Cool, thanks for the feedback.

Now does anyone have any suggestions on how I could fix the lighting issue? eg. moving the glare, shadows, etc.

Thanks again...
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