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Gurb junior member
Member # Joined: 30 Jan 2000 Posts: 9 Location: Valencia,SPAIN
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Fri Mar 10, 2000 9:28 pm |
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The first pic is awesome. I love the colors. The second one is cool too, but it would look more realistic if you added for glow and flash to it. Nice job though. |
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Dakkan member
Member # Joined: 23 Jan 2000 Posts: 259 Location: London, England (Nationality: Belgian)
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Posted: Fri Mar 10, 2000 10:07 pm |
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Hey,
good work. the things i would work on though, if i were u, is the focus on detail/sharpness, and the contrast in colours. keep on practicing, and u'll get there. ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Brain member
Member # Joined: 26 Oct 1999 Posts: 662 Location: Brisbane, Australia
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Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2000 3:43 am |
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Good stuff. The ojosaero needs a bit of work, mainly to add some detail. One thing that struck me straight away was that the eye looks very flat, when it should look like the eyeball is coming out from behind the eyelid. Try darkening the edges of the eyeball, and maybe even adding some eye lashes. Very kewl looking, keep it up. @:-)
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Gurb junior member
Member # Joined: 30 Jan 2000 Posts: 9 Location: Valencia,SPAIN
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Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2000 11:14 am |
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Thanks for the input, guys. You�re right, I�ll try try to make the eyeball look more a "ball" instead of a circle. |
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