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aka.arvid
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 Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:37 pm |
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Hi everybody!
I�m sort of new to Sijun, I�ve never posted anything, but I�ve looked at all amazing art here... Now I want to get involved more:P
I am hugely inspired by all environments posted here, especially by all the swedish artists, I�m swedish too  I�m nowhere near you guys, but to see what you can paint really makes me want to practice myself.
Well, my image is painted over a scanned drawing with the use of some textures and brushes, but mostly the round default one >_<
I�m happy with the rendering, but the rest is a mess, like focal points (the lit box why?) the ambigious storytelling, and so on, hmm, I�m very hard on myself :/ I guess it all depends on how you look at it.
Please tell me what you think 
H�r �r bilden!
edit: changing hosting all the time
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alyssa milano
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| Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 4:05 pm |
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| it`s pretty good man. really |
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aka.arvid
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:10 am |
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Thanks!
I�m gonna post in the speedpaint thread once I make a nice sp... but saw your airplane there - really really sweet |
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Matthew Is Godzilla
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:10 am |
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this one and the speedie u posted are not showing.
From what I saw of the op here you had a problem with the cloth at the stairs, there's a confusion whether the cloth hangs or cover the entrance to the stair or if it is supposed to hang down the stairs.
I assume the latter looking at the fluorescent light, but nevertheless you have a problem there in your pic, the light on the cloth aswell.
I'm on a laptop so I cannot comment on the color or brightness of the picture, sorry. |
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aka.arvid
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:26 am |
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Oh no, it may be bacuse I changed the image hosting to picasa, maybe it�s only me who can see it.... I will put it back on my own hosting for now. thanks a lot for telling me!
Hmm, cool, something I hadn�t thought of... maybe it would help by readding a handrail infront of it, so you can clearly see how it�s descending..
woops, yeah, I didn�t think of the light source with them, bad
It might be a little to flat and not contrasty enough..
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UGLY
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| Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 7:09 pm |
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its so amazing artwork.. love da lighthing and wall texture
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choboroy
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| Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:03 am |
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Really nice. Love your rendering!
Maybe that crack on the stairs to the left is a little flat, looks a bit like blood or oil sitting on top of the stairs. Not really important though heh. |
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aka.arvid
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| Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:05 am |
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UGLY and choboroy: thanks guys!
choboroy: yeah, I always thought it was a bit too flat... maybe a large chipped of piece would be nice. |
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AndreeWallin
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aka.arvid
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| Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 12:21 pm |
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| AndreeWallin: Thanks! |
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