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andreasrocha
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 Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 2:40 am |
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One of my sumbissions for the upcoming Exotique book. I have a tendency to portray the female figure from the back. I don't know if it's the charm of anonimity or if I'm just too lazy to paint faces. Judge for yourself.
Thanks to Janos and masque for the critiques.
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Omi-kun
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| Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:08 pm |
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Love the back! Very nice.
Two crits: her right fore arm looks really short and doesn't look foreshorten either since it seems to be flat against the door frame and it doesn't look that thick. And the other crit is the right part of the skirt feels a lot shorter than the left side, and if the wind is strong enough to blow the skirt that high it would have more effect on the hair too.
Otherwise this looks amazing.
Oh a third crit, the elbow area on her left arm looks a bit funky, on the inner bend. |
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Matthew Is Godzilla
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:19 am |
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| It looks very overexposed but I am on a laptop so I might be wrong, how is it with overexposure if you are supposed to print? |
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nanshu
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| Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 1:43 am |
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I like light and shadow of her shape.  |
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