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almanzor
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 Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 4:03 pm |
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Hi people, this is my first post here and a recent work.
Comments are always welcome.
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jmarkey77
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:02 am |
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| The cloak and person are very cool, the colors seem flat or lack a dynamic. Not sure if I can say why more than that. Keep it up! |
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almanzor
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:11 am |
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Thanks for comment man
Yes, the scene it`s a little static. I think next one will be better
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:47 am |
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| Cool picture, it's nicely turned out. My only suggestion would be to add more content and variation. Just put more stuff in that catches the eye - stuff in the air, particles and falling stones, and flesh out the cave more with interesting rock surfaces, jutting features and other mid-sized details. |
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almanzor
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 7:45 am |
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Capt.Fred, your advices are very contructive. I appreciate that.
I`m counting with them right now, becouse I`m painting
Thanks
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