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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:18 pm |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:13 am |
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Ah here it is! And it delivers as expected and then some. I'm not entirely sure how it makes me feel. I have been staring at it for a while before I went to sleep in the morning and again now, but I can't describe what mood it conveys to me. What I can say however is that I simply love looking at it, it is very appealing. Lovely color and style.
Of course it wouldn't be me if I hadn't something to bicker about Or let us call it recommendations for subtle improvements. First off, I would cut the frame a bit differently, or rather nudge the guys upwards so that the spacing from the edge on the top to his head is the same as on the left to his arm. Maybe it's just me, but that would give me more harmony. Second is the folds on his body, the ones in the middle are too unlit and look a bit weird because of that. Just extend the shading to where the folds meet and that should be enough to define the form. Actually that was all, good work.
Looking at it more while searching for those weak spots, I realized that I really really like the sparks and the smoke. I do hope that the personal predicament you seem to be in isn't becoming as bad as your pictures are becoming awesome, because you did some great work lately and I'm always hoping for another Tinusch when coming to sijun. |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:33 am |
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looks like your site is down. I can view the image and when I try your site its giving me a 404. |
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waynebebay member
Member # Joined: 10 Jan 2007 Posts: 80 Location: Portsmouth
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 12:46 pm |
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This is definitely something I would hang up in my living room... can we work something out? _________________ As simple as an apple with insides of a honeycomb |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:18 pm |
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Now's your chance Tinusch, squeeze as hard as you can! |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:13 pm |
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glitter: hey thanks for the tips. i updated it, looks better to me. very good advice.
awe: its working for me.. can you get to it now?
wayne: i know nothing about printing large scale... id be willing to try though. send me a message with what size and framing whathaveyou you want and ill check it out.
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:05 am |
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Yeah, I see it now. Very Very nice.
I dont know why but this one seems like theres a few emotions going on here. I see frustration, hope, anger, expectancy all swirled together.
This is a really cool image from you. It seems like this one came from inside you. And technically its really good too.
My only part that Im questioning is the right hand. It almost seems like the sleeve is supposed to be melding into the hand itself.. almost forming from the background.. but the hand seems too defined... Maybe.. I dunno.. I think Im just nit-picking.
I disagree with Glitter on the framing. I really like the asymetrical frame youve got. It brings more focus to the face. If the spacing were more equal it would make it loose focus I think.
Either way this is a great image from you. |
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Sampster member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2005 Posts: 182
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:31 pm |
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Definitely, if this isn't my favorite from you it's go second place. I've been liking pieces like this from you more and more recently ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:05 pm |
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thanks a lot guys.
awe: dunno exactly what you mean about the hand - i assume you mean his left, our right. the ribbed part is just the cuff of the sweatshirt, not fingers. the rest is his wrist stretching into the background. your analysis is pretty spot on, too. there were a lot of conflicting emotions in this, im surprised that came through. |
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JP Vieira junior member
Member # Joined: 17 Aug 2007 Posts: 35
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:59 am |
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hey thanks. |
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