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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:18 pm     Reply with quote


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:13 am     Reply with quote
Ah here it is! And it delivers as expected and then some. I'm not entirely sure how it makes me feel. I have been staring at it for a while before I went to sleep in the morning and again now, but I can't describe what mood it conveys to me. What I can say however is that I simply love looking at it, it is very appealing. Lovely color and style.

Of course it wouldn't be me if I hadn't something to bicker about Wink Or let us call it recommendations for subtle improvements. First off, I would cut the frame a bit differently, or rather nudge the guys upwards so that the spacing from the edge on the top to his head is the same as on the left to his arm. Maybe it's just me, but that would give me more harmony. Second is the folds on his body, the ones in the middle are too unlit and look a bit weird because of that. Just extend the shading to where the folds meet and that should be enough to define the form. Actually that was all, good work.

Looking at it more while searching for those weak spots, I realized that I really really like the sparks and the smoke. I do hope that the personal predicament you seem to be in isn't becoming as bad as your pictures are becoming awesome, because you did some great work lately and I'm always hoping for another Tinusch when coming to sijun.
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:33 am     Reply with quote
looks like your site is down. I can view the image and when I try your site its giving me a 404.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 12:46 pm     Reply with quote
This is definitely something I would hang up in my living room... can we work something out?
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:18 pm     Reply with quote
Now's your chance Tinusch, squeeze as hard as you can!
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:13 pm     Reply with quote
glitter: hey thanks for the tips. i updated it, looks better to me. very good advice.

awe: its working for me.. can you get to it now?

wayne: i know nothing about printing large scale... id be willing to try though. send me a message with what size and framing whathaveyou you want and ill check it out.


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:05 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, I see it now. Very Very nice.

I dont know why but this one seems like theres a few emotions going on here. I see frustration, hope, anger, expectancy all swirled together.

This is a really cool image from you. It seems like this one came from inside you. And technically its really good too.

My only part that Im questioning is the right hand. It almost seems like the sleeve is supposed to be melding into the hand itself.. almost forming from the background.. but the hand seems too defined... Maybe.. I dunno.. I think Im just nit-picking.

I disagree with Glitter on the framing. I really like the asymetrical frame youve got. It brings more focus to the face. If the spacing were more equal it would make it loose focus I think.

Either way this is a great image from you.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:31 pm     Reply with quote
Definitely, if this isn't my favorite from you it's go second place. I've been liking pieces like this from you more and more recently Smile
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:05 pm     Reply with quote
thanks a lot guys.

awe: dunno exactly what you mean about the hand - i assume you mean his left, our right. the ribbed part is just the cuff of the sweatshirt, not fingers. the rest is his wrist stretching into the background. your analysis is pretty spot on, too. there were a lot of conflicting emotions in this, im surprised that came through.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 6:17 am     Reply with quote
Very good job: congrats
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:59 am     Reply with quote
hey thanks.
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