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SubJodge
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 Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:36 am |
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Well here is my piece, i'm new to this!
I'd really love some feedback, i bet there are lots of things you can pick me up on, it would be really appreciated.
Thanks. |
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JP Vieira
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| Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:20 pm |
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I enjoyed it.
I would give more detail to the figures.
Good job
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Sampster
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| Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 12:07 am |
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I've done this before, so I don't claim to be miles ahead of you but...
That's an awful lot of black you have there, I definitely think it's hurting the picture because it's not even that it's necessarily out of focus, it just feels like blank space. I'm also not sure what's going on up in the sky... I don't know if those are clouds lit up by fire... or what?
But don't give up, it was a good idea for an image. |
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SubJodge
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| Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:59 am |
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Thankyou both.
Sampster, yes! i was a little worried there was an overpowering amount of black. As for the sky, it was an attempted bunch of clouds reflecting the light of the fire.
Thanks again! |
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