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jenkhuy junior member
Member # Joined: 16 May 2007 Posts: 12
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 9:29 am |
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Hi all. Here's one I could only describe as Men in Black. Probably inspired by some XFiles episode. Any criticisms welcome.
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daryl member
Member # Joined: 28 Oct 2000 Posts: 441 Location: Stockholm, Sweden
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 1:01 pm |
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I kind of like it, its an interesting angle and I wonder what is going on. You might want to make the action or story more self explanatory, as well as not paint everything in more or less the same values and detail (or lack thereof) to make the viewer's eyes go where you want. _________________ homepage:blog |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 6:41 pm |
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Pushing your detail in increasing areas of focus and maybe gradually changing the hues to give it all depth, maybe getting a little cooler as it gets toward the viewer to contrast the brightness, would make this so so good. Love your brushstrokes |
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jenkhuy junior member
Member # Joined: 16 May 2007 Posts: 12
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 1:12 pm |
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Thank you for the comments. Although I usually lose interest in refining my drawings after I've completed them once, I do see much room for improvement from your comments - I just may try to rework this. |
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