[designboot]

Hi there!

I'm currently working on the Innkeeper orthographic at Arek malec design for Mystery of Albesila project.
Here you can find some Arek Malec designs for this character:
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/3351/karczmarzconceptmaleclq7.jpg
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7379/karczmaszks7.jpg

Coments and critiques are most welcome

here some little progress:

Step 1:





Step 2

[Hallsavenger]

Nice stuff

[Urbatect]

I would make shoulders a bit smaller and arms a bit bigger. Showing a bit of butt crack is also a way to make someone that is handling food look more disgusting...

[Novacaptain]

Is it on purpose that he looks like a deflated balloon? You have to think in 3D a little to figure this out i think. For instance, his chin seems to be on the same plane, in space, as his neck. His nose on the same plane as his cheeks, and so on. The illusion that his body curves into the drawing surface on the sides is generally lost too. The proportions look reasonably ok even though his thorax seems a little "compressed" vertically.
Keep at it
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