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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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nicole member
Member # Joined: 08 Dec 1999 Posts: 90 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2000 3:30 pm |
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Wow, that's great, I love it. Very good
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Giant Hamster member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 1782
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2000 3:49 pm |
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other than the blue part and the wobbly cheek. she looks like someone i know! =) just she has dark red bangs.
im in a picky mood, so im going to pick on you
cool pic, but her nose seems a bit too tilted and the wobbly cheek. her right arm seems a straight on the inside and and has too much of a "wooden arm posture" look. if you were to give her more of a thingy curving from her arm to her armpit it would fit better =)
and to fix the wood arm give her a bit of a curve on her inner arm. there is no light on the outside of her left boob, it looks like construction paper without a small ) type highlight.
i like the pic. keep working at it! =)
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[This message has been edited by Giant Hamster (edited February 17, 2000).] |
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Joachim member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: Norway
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2000 2:33 am |
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I like it !
I don't think you need to fix much to make it seem more correct. It looks a bit like that kind of rough style Dave McKeen (think that's his name ?!?) has on his covers, very nice !
Maybe you could just straighten up the nose a bit and make the hair a little more "sexy" in a way. Except for that I think it's great.
Nice breasts btw, hehe
Joachim
web: http://home.sol.no/~jbarrum/
[This message has been edited by Joachim (edited February 18, 2000).] |
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B member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 322 Location: Houston, Tx, USA
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2000 7:16 am |
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i like it, cept i don't understand the purpose of the yellow star,. |
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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Darkmoon member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 279 Location: Atlanta. GA.
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2000 5:10 am |
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wow, love the eyes.... blue skin... looks soft... nice pretty....
i like the way you painted the textures
great!
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Ko member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2000 Posts: 457 Location: Aarhus, Denmark
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2000 5:49 am |
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Wow... great style
I really like the "oilpaint" look
I have tried to keep this style
in a few pics but always end up
smoothing/shading the pic so that
it looks more airbrush like...
I wish I could stop doing that
just ONCE!....
Ko |
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