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EraserX
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This is a character from a creator owned project I'm working on. I'm just nailing down her look right now. Crits and comments are vurra nice. Penciled on paper, inked in OpenCanvas 1.1, and colored in Photoshop for those who care.
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eyewoo
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| Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 3:33 am |
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Very nice work.
I have one crit regarding the perspective. At this angle, a little off sort of knocks the picture down a bit. I think her long left leg is OK... it adds to the forward jumping motion, but the torso perspective pulls that forward motion back... i.e. at this angle you would not be able see so much of her abdominal area... I've done a simple paintover pulling down the upper torso justa bit and slightly to the picture left.
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| Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:22 am |
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| It is nice work. I agree with eyewoo about the foreshortening. The main thing for me, though, is they eye treatment makes her seem a little remote. |
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| Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:45 am |
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| yep.nice ..I like that canvas line. |
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