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Giuseppe T
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 4:50 pm     Reply with quote
Hi,

I�m new here and quite new in digital painting, therefore I�d appreciate any feedback and critique...



P.S. wonderful artwork in this forum!!!

Thanks in advance
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Nilwort
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 6:09 pm     Reply with quote
I like the painting, the house in particular is very well done. It looks like the road gets very narrow around the bend, almost to a point that it looks dangerous/impossible for the carriage to pass. Maybe widening that part would help? Are the mountains in the background and the cliff in the foreground made of the same stone? The contrast of lightness between the two makes the cliff look very distinctive or man-made. Also, if the moon is in the background, should the surfaces facing the viewer be darker or lit from the back?

Just some stuff to think about. Cool
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Giuseppe T
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 7:11 pm     Reply with quote
thank you very much for your reply. I�m delighted you like my house. Your critique was very constructive and of course I think about your thoughts.

It�s my first night scene so I�m bit confused bout what colours a. s. o. to use but I�ll try to fix it and post an update when done.

cheers Very Happy
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