[blunt3d2]

Hi, I worked on this over the last months. C&C appreciated!

View/Download the video: http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=3798176321959518691

If you have Doom3, you can run it within the engine: http://doom3.filefront.com/file/Machinima_Winter_Tale;57210

Some screenshots:




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[Sumaleth]

Some critiques:

Too many camera cuts. I assume that was intended to be its "style", but having a cut every second got annoying very quickly.

Pacing is a bit of an issue. Actions linger for too long, especially the intro and outro where no story is happening.

The story itself is also a little too vague. I'm not quite sure what prompted him to stop and drop the bottles. After that point it was clearer -- he wanted to save the last bottle, but was distracted and it dropped too. Then he was sad.
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[blunt3d2]

yea, thats the story thanks for the comment. i wanted the movie go with the music, maybe i should add more animations and stuff.. and be more sparse with camera cuts. with the next project, this was abit a prototype to check of ddom3-stuff works, ill consider that.
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