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morano
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 8:41 pm     Reply with quote
what do You think?

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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 8:49 pm     Reply with quote
Damn good, but the bottom edge of her face needs some shading to give it some contour, it looks two-dimensional. The lips are a little lifeless, maybe puff them up a little and make the whole mouth a bit bigger.
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Critical Pete
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:02 pm     Reply with quote
it's good, but the lips are at a different angle than the nose and eyes. you should rotate the lips clockwise a little and it should be fine. great colouring.
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