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Ian Jones
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Figured I'd post my latest design, I interact a bit on the forum but hardly ever post anything as I only really do design work not illustration / art. This is for an open source VJ software, who are looking for a logo and splash screen. Critique and comments are most welcome.
Edit: Fixed visibility of 'TransZendent' text. Hope it looks better now? Also adjusted the size of the logo echo. Which do you prefer?
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lysander
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:44 am |
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oooooo, shiny....
I mean, erm yes, i like it, its a little difficult to read the text in the corner though, and the 'TransZendent:' bit doesnt seem to stand out as much as the rest of the text underneath the logo, nothing major, just a bit distracting to me.
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Ian Jones
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 2:41 am |
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| Yes, your totally right... the TransZendent does fall back a bit, I'll fix that. The text in the corner is just a watermark. |
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wow...........
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eyewoo
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:05 am |
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Yes... nicely done, but I think the echo or chadow is too large. Believe it would work better if it were smaller...
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Ian Jones
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:30 am |
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Thx for your feedback everyone.
eyewoo: You may be right, I have given the echo resize a chance... what do you think? I'm almost convinced, but already too familiar with how it was. |
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:45 am |
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Sorry ,i can't still desplay my work cause i never find a host as you said to me .what did you mean !i'm a beginner.. 
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 7:02 am |
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| The smaller shadow is better. |
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:44 am |
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Because of the highlight at the top, it seems more like an echo rather than a shadow.
I tried playing with it for awhile and now feel no echo or shadow is the best... IMHO |
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