[Naeem]

Hey guys,

I just finished working on my website. All I need to do now is finish up getting my gallery in order. So have a look, and tell me what you think. I think I may add a bit of flash later on next week...
Some questions;
How's the loading time?
What do you think of the layout?

here's the link; http://www.annis-naeem.com/
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[[Shizo]]

Nice! I like how it's simple. But the top pic does not go well with the rest of the site's style..
I think it should be either all-white style, or comply with the top pic by having darker pastel tones and stuff... I'm just guessing

And i always thought your nick was annishamad ahha... silly me.

[Nag]

Quite like it. Simple, neat and has a fast loading time.
Like a website should be =)

Layout looks good imo. Perhaps the pictures that lead you to the sub galleries ( Professional Work, Finished Work etc ) should be side by side instead of on top of eah other? or 2 in each row.

[Max]

I like it. Easy to navigate and simple design. Loading time is really okay!
And some art I haven't seen before : ) - cool stuff!!

[Godwin]

ah nice a simple, I like

It looks a little more like one of those professional corporate site templates though, maybe a more personal feel and touch would be nice? Just a suggestion heh
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[Naeem]

thanks guys.

i'll be working on the layout some more. i don't like it much either. it will most likely be changed .

i appreciate the crits.
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[Naeem]

ok,

i updated the layout and all. it sfinally finished!
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[AndyT]

Really nice. But as Godwin wrote ... maybe it could do with a more personal feel to it.

There are some things that I would change. I didn't see that there is a gallery right away.
I knew there had to be a link somewhere so I continued searching until I found the main menu.

If I hadn't known what to look for I probably would have left pretty soon ...
because I wouldn't have known what the website is about.
I'd probably add that to the header of the site somewhere.

Personally I think a more artsy/personal, less technical layout would be better.

Also some of the thumbnail previews don't look as powerful as the actual images.
The random image preview for an album might be technically intriguing ...
but if you want to make an impression with your website I'd simply put the strongest image there instead (if possible).

Why do you sometimes use We and sometimes I?

[Naeem]

Andy> thanks. you're right. I need to clean up a bit. And about the "we" thing. I didn't use that. The template I used from Mambo has it as it's default and I don't really know how to change it. Once I get rid of it, and personalize the whole site, it should be better. Thanks for you comments
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