[doc_fluff]

i haven't really posted anything on here before (or at least it's been a long time) anywhoo...i'd like some constructive feed back on this piece.

[jinnseng]

It's really sketchy, i'm not sure where you're trying to go with this. Are you going for a stylized look? Or will you try to polish this up? It looks like you did it with crayons. I'm not a big fan of having huge white backgrounds with a single image. It could use some different values also, because the piece looks flat.

[doc_fluff]

here's an update to it...not quite finished but i'm still trying to decide on one direction. the whiteness will be removed. it's meant for print so i'm just going to cut the white out.