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Phil
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Good job Phil, i like it! 
Do you have any closeups of Alice?
She looks very interesting
Best photo entry so faar by faar for the contest!
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| Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 1:43 pm |
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Wow, thats nice!
It all looks great but this one thing that poped out at me right away.
Just above her head is a biege path moving down to touch her head. Since they are both very similar in color you lose her head a bit into the background. Her arm has a high contrast with the background, which is good.
I was thinking that if you cloned a bit of the terrain from left of the path to just over her head it would make her head a bit more visible. Leave that horizontal path bit.
Thanks for posting it, very cool  |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 12:36 am |
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Stunning photorgraphy.
And I've never seen any photo work that good before either. |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:33 am |
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| ya....very cool....super nice work here,Phil. |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 10:45 am |
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Looks very nice. Cool style and mix of techniques and media.
The only thing I�d change would be the color of Alice�s hair to a darker one or brown or reddish instead of blonde. |
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Phil
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| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 12:57 pm |
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Thanks guys!
Randis - There's a close up on the mini site.
Yeah. A few people have commented on the trail above her head and that side of the frame in general. I'll experiment with it for a bit when I get home.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 10:45 pm |
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Very cool..
Good way to incorporate the cat to hahah :p |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 12:51 am |
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| really nice picture, but something bothers me about the angle it was taken.. can't quite put my finger on it atm, but it will come to me |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 11:28 pm |
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Awesome work Everything is integrated so well.
Except, I think Alice stands out a bit too much though. Her clothing is too bright on the shadowed side for the lighting in the piece methinks. |
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