[Danielus]

Hi there, I'd like to hear from more experienced members some criticisings of the following work. It started as a sketch, then I added some more details, working on PS, but with the 4X5 Penpartner tablet with 2 levels sensitivity of stroke (1-I push, 2-I dont push strong ennough), I made some experiments with delicate photocollageing on it, the work isn't finnish yet but I would apreciate very much Your advices.

Thanx, Danielus

[Warhead82]

Looks cool, but the guys in the back look like there floating, and are in to much stiff poses...Maybe add some more, background, forestry, sandbags whatever... make it more interesting, or just leave it as a sketch...
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[Danielus]

Hi there, made some work on it, and that's the current version



dunno if will work on it more or rather start another work[/img]