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Kid blues
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 Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:42 am |
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Hi folks, that's the second illustration I have posted in Sijun. This pic is a kind of self-expression. I tried to present the feeling of leisure and the devotion of Harmonica playing.
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jinnseng
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| Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:53 pm |
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| Hey hey thats pretty nice. The face area and hands look very well done. There's a weird effect going on with the feet. With how realisitic the feet look then they're on this plain grass. It somehow breaks up unification of the piece as a whole to me. Overall I like it though. |
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Kid blues
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| Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:29 pm |
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Ture man, I start to feel that's a bit stragne when feet in focus and grass in blur.. , thanks a lot for that advice! I think the best way to fix it is to add more detials on the grass. 
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watmough
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| Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 8:28 pm |
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| i think u need darker values in the grass. |
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Duracel
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| Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 12:19 pm |
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hmm ... you can hold your harmonica this way, but im not sure if its very handy and for sure its not the common way.
http://www.harmonicalessons.com/handeffs.html
Nontheless, i think you got the feeling of slow-playing the harmonica. 
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