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roca
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 Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 1:15 pm |
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well this is my first attempt at colouring in Photoshop it was suppose to be the first page of my hand drawn series I kinda don't like it much so I'm going to redo it and put more time and more effort into it, critizism is welcome that'll help me to improve on my next attempt!
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roca
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| Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:08 pm |
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| lol, I see the people who viewed why not juse leave a comment! |
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LadyHydralisk
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| Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 8:40 am |
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| Go to a good school of drawing. |
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Evanrs
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| Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 8:09 pm |
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I'm really sorry, but I concur with the femme-alien zerg beast lady.
EDIT: Not to say I dont like cartoony comics, I'm a fan of Jack and PA, but even has a cartoon, those lines need work, smooth things out, like the head in the first frame, you can smooth everything out to look like a style many cartoonists would envy but it seems you didnt even try to make the appearance smooth and professional. |
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LadyHydralisk
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| Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 12:35 pm |
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Don't be sorry, it takes a brave and honorable person to tell the truth in order to help people see themselves.
There's no reason she/he? can't rock the canvas/pad if they get the right training. |
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DeadbeaT
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| Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 5:27 pm |
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Basically, the reason your stuff isnt commented, is because theres little or nothing to comment, this stuff is the digital equvivalent to stickfigures in your school books, and im sure you can do better if you just work some. Now go do that.
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gLitterbug
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| Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 6:31 pm |
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| DeadbeaT wrote: |
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Are you taking bets? |
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DeadbeaT
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| Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 7:09 pm |
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| gLitterbug wrote: |
| DeadbeaT wrote: |
| ... im sure you can do better if you just work some. Now go do that. |
Are you taking bets? |
I'm praying
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