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Gaxar
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 Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2000 5:05 pm |
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This forum is just what I've been looking for! I have some pictures here that I would love your feedback on. All of them are done in Photoshop with a wacom artpad. I know I still have a lot to learn, but hey, thats what I want your comments for! I've only been doing this to and from for a year or so. Anyway, constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Of course I'll try to return the favor...
The first one is the cover of a swedish rpg e-zine. The second one is the cover of a roleplaying-game (again, swedish), and the third one I did just for fun at a party.
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Leo
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| Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2000 5:45 pm |
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Whoa! There are so many mighty guys joining to this board... wow... welcome  !
You know, i like these fist 2 images... you've nice light style... just looking as illustration for tales book (if i've it in my childhood  ). Lookin' good.
Constructive criticism... i'm too small dude to say something =)... there are many talented dudez around. Wait! If I'll done this images i'll probably removed these black comic lines on the buildings.
/Leo
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Gaxar
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 2:24 am |
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Tanks! 8)
And yeah, good point. The buildings are way too sharp and don't really look like they're in the background. I was thinking about doing mist above the water and about halfway up among the buildings, but the deadline was getting dangerously closer... |
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Cypher
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 2:28 am |
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cool stuff.
For an even better effect, try to blend the colors and the black lines, by smudging them and then cleaning up and sharpening the edges with the paintbrush.
I like that last one, it's wicked. |
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jasonN
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 2:45 am |
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Nah, I like the black lines a lot. It gives it a very stylized cartoon look. I really like that kind of stuff. I definetely like the 2nd pic the most. Great work!
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n8
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 4:04 am |
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| i guess its all just personal taste....i just think u should blur the background in the second pic....just a tad....not too much...hehehe...but im no expert...only been doing this a few months...nywho...great pics =) |
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Affected
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 4:09 am |
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| I wouldn't blur the background... Maybe darken or desaturate it a little. |
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Mongoose
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 6:18 am |
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Very refreshing! (I sound like a commerical for Trident) :P
It's nice to see a new style once in a while, and this is definitely a style I like Keep up the good work!
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dennison
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| Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2000 7:06 am |
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| mongoose is so fat. :P |
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