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Totally
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These illustrations are for a narrative that interweaves elements of science fiction and noir. I'll be adding a couple more illustrations and a 6 page comic to this thread in the coming couple of weeks.
[edit]Here's the final illustration (comic to follow soon):
[edit] Added this one:
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| Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 10:28 pm |
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hmm they look very static, its all round curves no straight edges, very soft strokes.. the poses are too balanced to give it the moving feeling.
My advice is loosen it up. I get the feeling your kinda afraid to make major decisions. Some more drastic shadows would definetly help with the noir feeling.
I all looks too controlled and brushed off to me
sorry if I'm sounding harsh I just think you could improve.
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RANDI BUTTERWORTH!!
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| Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 11:12 am |
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Hah, sorry, we broke up a year ago =P
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