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Member # Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 236
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Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 6:09 am |
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The quality of your voice and the BG tracks and singing are very good quality. On my 5.1 speakers, it sounded very rich and large.
As for the song, it's a little slow, but mainly it's too emo for me, particularly for the "I'm over you, it's time to move on" line, which don't ring true. Heartfelt and honest, to be sure, just a little too unconvincing. If he's over her, and moving on, he wouldn't be so focused on the "hole" inside, and reminicing on all the good times. There'd be more about the new life that's filled the hole. That would make it believable. _________________ Life is short. Expect nothing, enjoy everything.
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