[eyalyab]

hi
after a few tries i remembered my username and password
i havnt been here and havnt drawn in a over a year =/

i didnt know if to post in finished works or wip, but since i didnt feel like this was quite finished, i will post here for now and take another look at it tomorrow.



i want c&c's please..

[The Real Mark]

Well it's awesome! - Seeming so though she looks like she's moving, im not sure what to do with the detail. But perhaps some more shine on the wet areas of the mouth? - really though it looks finished and great!

[eyalyab]

The Real Mark: thanks for the comment. i added some gloss to the mouth area and threw some highlights too as a friend of mine suggested. i updated the picture in the first post.
this is the previous for comparison


thanks

[daz199]

very nice i like the rendering of the eyes
the whole image looks a lil blurry tho, maybe you painted it at a smaller resolution?