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Metaborg
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 4:17 am     Reply with quote
Hello everybody, this is my first post here.
These are two painitngs I've made for kicks.



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Naeem
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 6:13 am     Reply with quote
i like them both. however, theres 1 thing in each of them that i dont like. the first one, the 'liney' detail on the rock and the second one, the dragon doesn't fit in i guess....
but anyhow, i really like how u did everything overall! good work Very Happy
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Diruo
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 7:17 am     Reply with quote
They're both great. The first especially. I don't share annisahmad's opinion. It's very Nausicaa-like. The second is nice too but the dragon could use some more work I think. The hair on its head doesn't seem to be properly aligned with the head.. maybe?. Hard to put my finger on it but something about it bothers me.

Awesome in any case.
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ElfGirlKimmy
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 9:43 pm     Reply with quote
I especially like the first piece - its really pleasing to the eye and well-composed. And the colors work well, I think.

I like the idea of the second one, but something felt uncomfortable about it, as has been said. I can't seem to place it at all though. Maybe its the colors in the top half the piece? The bright blue stands out too much from the rest of it, and distracts the eye from the focal point, which I would assume should be the dragon.

Anyways, nice work, I like your style much. And welcome to Sijun. Wink
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The Real Mark
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:50 am     Reply with quote
The first one is brilliant!
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Ragnarok
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 2:14 am     Reply with quote
I really like the first one.
About the second one, I think the figure of the dragon looks more like a pterodactil imho. Also its pawn is almost invisible to me (the one next to his body).
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